We cruised along the Overseas Highway deep into the Gulf. Water, water was everywhere. Water was all we could see until we pulled onto Key Largo where we mutated into Bogie & Bacall. We swam, danced, dined. He wet his whistle. In the morning it was over.
Bogie and Bacall. Excellent!
Thank you!
Thanks.
Thanks! I felt they were the real power of the story.
Very vivid. Easy to imagine one is there. Good six.
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Sounds good to me! Beach, dancing, dinner…bring it 😀
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A very picturesque SSS! Nice mutation.
Thank you! I’m happy you enjoyed it.
Something to be said about heading back home. Nicely done.
thank you and thanks for introducing me to 6 sentences.
A great day at the beach and then back to reality. Whistful but nice.
Thanks.
Well that was short and sweet. (the Six and the encounter)
As a newcomer i now realize that everyone else is purposely using long sentences. I will adapt! Thanks for stopping by.
No! I meant that as a compliment to the writing. The syntax of this Six fit your story, which I thought was cool. Effective. There are no rules beyond six sentences, and even then it can become six stanzas, or six lines…
Sometimes the prompt word is a real focus and sometimes it is merely included. Just go with it, each week, six ??? at a time.
Thanks for your input and your reassurance D. I’m really enjoying this challenge.